Writing Task 1 (a letter)
You will be moving to a new office soon. Write a letter to the general manager to request some necessary equipment for your future office. In your letter say
– What equipment will you need and when?
– Explain why you will need it.
– Suggest where to get it from and why.
Respected Manager,
Greetings for the day.!!
I am Divya, from HR department of Anand Branch. Since our office is shifting in 100 ft Road, from Sardar Gunj in coming next month so I am writing this letter to you as we need some special equipments for our new office.
Firstly, I need a Coffee and tea dispensing machine. The head-office has decided to dispose-off the old machine in this office. Moreover, some of the furniture such as the conference table is being sent to the nearby Gurgaon office. Consequently, I will need a new one to conduct staff meetings and discuss business with clients. The projector, unfortunately, was damaged during the shifting process. The movers and takers will reimburse the damages to the company. However, I urgently need a wifi-enabled projector to discuss various business issues with team members and clients.
I know you will provide all these products from our trusted vendors with whom we are dealing since years but I suggest you to buy these from local vendors. I know very good and trusted vendors in local price who can offer competitive prices and great after sales service to us and this way we can save the company's budget.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Kind Regards,
Divya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 139, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e old machine in this office. Moreover, some of the furniture such as the conference table ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95714285714 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61662658663 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638095238095 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4214039594 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0769230769 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245420221597 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693362122322 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683358498003 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113889713986 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599916310362 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.