Some people believe that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people think that having friends who all the time have the same viewpoint is better than have friends who may be disagreeing with them.
The first notion says that the person who has friends agree with him on any issue is having many advantages and disadvantages such as strength the relationship between friends and make the discussions with them logical, fair and quiet. For example, I know two friends always agree with me on many discussions and I feel positively when I talk with, and I totally take their opinion on any problem face me.One of this opinion disadvantages is when anyone might take an incorrect decision when he find all his friends the same point of view, and he will feel puzzled.
On the other hand, there are some people believe that having friends did not agree with them is having many advantages and disadvantages, one of the advantages is known different types of thinking and this can help us choose the correct decision. One of the disadvantages is attributing some problems between them and that can make a week in the friendship, You can imagine yourself urge your friends and they had view against you, this can make me feel frustrated and cause some attributes with my friends, and May I lost my friends. For example Egypt after the January Revolution many political discussions has happened and everyone had his opinion, and he thought that his opinion is the correct and other`s opinions are incorrect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: finds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, for example, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85887096774 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64744381752 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540322580645 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4428104354 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 200.833333333 106.682146367 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.3333333333 20.7667163134 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438187242648 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223404074277 0.084324248473 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118458486905 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325612438747 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895092541968 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.