Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care about them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People think that it is important to exchange gifts to family members and mates to show how they care, while others believe that there are other ways to show how we care about our people. I think that exchanging gifts is fine, but more important is to spend time with your family.
Giving and receiving gifts to your family members and friends is important when it is someone’s birthday or it is Christmas or any other important event. Of course it depends on the gift, as majority of gifts are unnecessary things which going to collect dust on their desk. There are no limits and to give gifts there does not to be exact date on the calendar. For example I like to give gifts to my family members or friends without a reason These little gifts can make them more happy because they don't expect it.
There are also other ways to show people how you care about them. Most important is spending time with your family, especially with older generation. Grandparents does not care about things but care most time to spend their grandchildren. For example take your grandmother to the walk to the city and spend some nice quality time with them. They value this time so much more than unnecessary gifts as this is what they remember for the lifetime.
It is important to show your family and friends that you care of them. Buying a present or going to the cinema, most important is to spend time with people who you care because time flies and you never know when it is to late to show how much you care about them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s can make them more happy because they dont expect it. There are also other wa...
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Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: There are other; There are also
...happy because they dont expect it. There are also other ways to show people how you care about ...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ime flies and you never know when it is to late to show how much you care about th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52707581227 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2616341697 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451263537906 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5757667241 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4615384615 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449663866991 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178690413064 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136855676944 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287262704107 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707246763346 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.27 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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