Some people argued that people do not have to live with the internet all the time. Someone disagree about that. In my opinion, the internet is not necessary for our life. Life should be full of reality and practice.
First and foremost, the internet is becoming a part of a human's life in contemporary society. People exchange and trade everything that can be willing to it online. Most of the people even participate in visual fitness class through the internet so they could gym at home. Another significant argument in favor is that technology improvement made real life to rely on the internet. If people travel to China, you will realize that the Chinese have been stopped using cash anymore. For instance, it is common for people to pay their bill offline, all you need to do is scan a QR code and use a finger to confirm.
In contrast, the purpose of the internet is the tool of a human. Individuals spent their time online because of it helpful. Admittedly, through the internet, it is easy for someone to build their skills but also will be distractive sometimes. The consequences are not as good as in the real classroom. In my experience, I still buy books to read because it is touchable and good for your health such as eyes. I will spend some time to check the comments about the book on the internet or try to find a good release version. I write a physical letter to my friend sometimes. One hand, people will appreciate the letter is on the paper meaning I care about my friend that worth my time to write. On the other hand, they will read it carefully. It will boost our friendship in some way.
In conclusion, I strongly agree people do not need internet access to live a life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'disagrees'.
Suggestion: disagrees
...with the internet all the time. Someone disagree about that. In my opinion, the internet...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...t, the internet is becoming a part of a humans life in contemporary society. People ex...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54545454545 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53737453339 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7879885699 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6666666667 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227132588781 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624966175199 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608861821143 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159156428524 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549260444746 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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