Some people believe that managers are responsible for the organization’s success, while others think various features of the organization play a vital role in it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is often a dichotomy on whether managers are accountable for success of a company or numerous other factors are indispensable in making an organization viable.
Firstly, managers are part and parcel of a company and they can lead an organization to success to a higher level because all the employees are directly connected with and guided by their managers. In other form, managers are the linchpin between higher management and workers and all the problems, challenges and suggestions of employees are dealt with or forwarded by them to the senior management.
Secondly, managers can easily motivate the staff as they share a special bond with them. In addition to this, managers play an important role in the tough times of a company. It can be seen that most of the workers try to quit their job while sales plunge in organization, however, managers can not only deter them but also assist to ameliorate the market share. That is why, managers are significant in turning around an organization from nadir to the zenith.
Nevertheless, numerous other factors are equally essential apart from managers. A healthy work environment is a major part of success of any firm and a number of studies reveal that cordial relationship amongst colleagues, increase the productivity of employees. Additionally, a soothing ambience and proffering perks and gifts periodically, spurs staff members to achieve targets and goals set by bosses.
In conclusion, according to me, managers are key factors for attaining success in an organization, nonetheless, several other factors also play a significant role.
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- The number of older people is increasing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25680933852 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03532872813 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0456115945 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.818181818 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183552819697 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072115580293 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507685045172 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110956386709 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466565833524 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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