Design industry has evolved so much during the recent development, with their continuous improvement and new ideas to bring changes in daily life, Open spaces culture has taken momentum. Everybody believes in transparent culture. People think due to their benefits it is more important to use Open Space designs in school and work environment. Open Space design have pros and cons; in terms of adapting it, and their benefits versus their impacts.
Open Space use at work has increased the collaboration at work, faster resolution to problems and bonding between the employees. For example, Facebook office uses the Open Space design and lot of individuals like it due to its transparency, better time to resolve the issues and no cabin system, even CEO of company sits at the round table desk like other employees. Statistically it has been proven, individuals feel that it encourages healthy relation with another employee and they are more vocal about their opinions as compared to close room offices. Similarly, Open Space designs at school are helping teachers to bond and evaluate kids quickly as supposedly classroom walls. Due to this, teachers are able to group the kids into batches and can focus on individual batches on their weakness and strength.
On the other hand, Open space design, are expensive to adapt. Once adapted - companies and schools have to consistently catch up with the trend to make sure its upto the market standards. Secondly, some introvert employees do not like Open space design as they think it is easily being micro managed, their break times, lunch hours can be easily tracked due to openness. It reduces the competition as one employee can easily listen all the conversations of other employee. Open space design also is consider deviating as some people - like research work prefer to work in closed sitting and concentrate on their work.
To recapitulate, benefits of Open Space outweigh the disadvantages hence I prefer Open space sitting. In certain cases, where employees needs closed space or rooms, they always have choice of using conference room for the time of their research. Similarly, students with special needs who need closed sitting can opt for the closed room classes in order to limit the diversion from the regular kids.
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.•You should write at least 250 words.•Y 84
- Some people believe that modern designs for schools and offices with more open spaces are necessary. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such spaces? Give your opinion. 78
- People think that children nowadays have more freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...entum. Everybody believes in transparent culture. People think due to their benef...
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Suggestion:
...rket standards. Secondly, some introvert employees do not like Open space design ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
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Message: "needs closed" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'closing' or 'to be closed'.
Suggestion: closing; to be closed
...In certain cases, where employees needs closed space or rooms, they always have choice...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13404825737 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61682216099 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565683646113 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3818960028 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.647058824 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308705692173 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109231268724 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709570686884 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197299921983 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279525936773 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.