Today's kids are called Next Generation, they have more tools and technology available to them, as world has progressed from stone Age to Robotic world. Due to this rapid development, children have more independence than before. However, in my opinion this is not freedom but effective way to progress in today's competitive world.
During my childhood, I was not allowed to watch Television or YouTube because these were the only medium for entertainment but today Kids have option to take the class via online method or class room method. This is so beneficial when you child is sick or have inability to make to class due to health or weather condition, they can easily opt for the online classroom and avoid missing the crucial classes. A survey was conducted by Children's association of Illinois, which took opinion of 500 parents about feedback on learning from online medium like YouTube - It clearly resulted that Kids are learning quicker and remember the concepts when they take watch such videos. Also, these days, Children are more vocal about their choices which is good for long run as they are not dropping schools in the middle. Earlier, parents used to force their choices of subject on their kids - which sometime resulted in failure and depression. Hence, this freedom of having to choose is doing good for the kids and making impact in their life.
On the other side, there is some micro managing needed while this freedom is out there, some kids pick wrong choice of learning and intend to develop aggression from these classes, which in turn is resulting Gun violence, hatred in the society.
In a conclusion, Children these days do have freedom and their advantages are making greater impact in their life and society. It just needs little bit parental control where you can set control on the time to watch the videos, or for that matter Parents need to make them responsible for their choices and prepare them for their failures.
- People think that children nowadays have more freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.•You should write at least 250 words.•Y 84
- Some people believe that modern designs for schools and offices with more open spaces are necessary. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such spaces? Give your opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92145015106 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41807575017 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561933534743 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4299307308 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.75 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138613957769 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649010831378 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517492147785 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859168020741 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373987377076 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.