Certain people opine that nowadays we have so many choices related to goods, work, etc. In my opinion, with the advancement of technology the choices for various things has increased manifold. Although with the increase in comsumption, prices of the products has rise as well, this increase is not much than the salary of people nowadays as compared to the past.
Firstly, with the increase in machinery, manufacturing of goods has risen due to which a large number of commodities are produced. As a result of which, supermarkets are flooded with a huge number of products and these products rarely goes out stock. For instance, in agricultural sector, with the use of improved equipments and chemicals by the farmers, farming is now able to produce a large amount of crops with greater quality.
Secondly, as the population has increased, the demand and supply graph of commodities has also risen which resulted in the increase in competition for same products in the market. As there is a lot of competition, the quality of product has improved so that customers prefer to buy from that particluar company.To illustrate, if we want to purchase noodles from market, we will be provided with many choices of brand such as maggie, yippee noodles, wai-wai noodles and so on.
Finally, apart from choices related to products available in the market, the job opportunites has also increased. This provided people with option to switch jobs if not satisfied with the working conditions or salary. Also, people are paid with high salaries for the same job as compared to the past.
To conclude, with the rise in production of commodities and the companies manufacturing them, the choices for these products has increased. Apart from these choices, nowadays a lot of options related to work are present. However, with the high consumption of natural resources, the products that are obtained from them are declining but people have started producing alternatives for them that will result in the increase in their option as well.
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and the academic world Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both views and give your 67
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 73
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 61
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 47
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
...comsumption, prices of the products has rise as well, this increase is not much than...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...cturing of goods has risen due to which a large number of commodities are produced. As a result o...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...fer to buy from that particluar company.To illustrate, if we want to purchase nood...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09281437126 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78163693423 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488023952096 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0256343482 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119392584524 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523531162318 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632910551038 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804308959656 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655210241281 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.