Few people think that choices for consumers has increased in recent times. I strongly agree with the statement and reasons are emergent of e commerce and new players, due to globalization and liberalization in each sectors, giving various choices to the people.
Major reason for increase in wide variety of products available in the market is globalization. As the barriers among the countries are lifted which provide opportunity to global players to enter new market. Additionally, each companies are inventing new products more quickly because of the increase in competition. For instance, earlier there were only 2-3 brands for garments but as when India invited global players in the market in 1991 there were new entrants like US Polo, UCB and many more giving range of choices for the customers.
With the development of technology there is a booming market of e commerce which make wide range of items available to people on their finger tips. There are hundreds of websites just of garments and in each of these websites, there are thousands on products which ultimately gave more options to the customers. For example, Myntra company shows 1500000+ products in all segments.
To conclude, there is no doubt with the globalisation, giving rising to new players, and emergent of e-commerce there is way too many choice for each type of products be it grocery items, clothing items or electronic items. With the encouragement of government to start a business, it is possible that in near future choosing items become more difficult for the people.
- As housing is a basic need for people government should provide free housing for everyone who cant t afford it To what extend do you agree or disagree 67
- Mobile phones and the Internet are very useful for old people However this section of population is the fewer users of mobile phones and the Internet In what ways can mobile phones and the Internet be useful to the old people How can the old people be enc 84
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he statement and reasons are emergent of e commerce and new players, due to globa...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ailable in the market is globalization. As the barriers among the countries are li...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s be it grocery items, clothing items or electronic items. With the encouragement...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14117647059 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81574089193 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3838344883 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.181818182 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0763798117858 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302649689489 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03728986856 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574281409724 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437227430284 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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