Smart phone devices and internet are quite popular and has many uses for everyone especially for older people but this strata of population is less percentage of users of such technology. Internet and mobile phones can be used by old people in connecting with friends and family as well as in imparting their knowledge and experience with younger generation of the society.
One of the uses for older people is connecting with old friends and making new ones. It is usually difficult for older people to be in touch with their friends and eventually feel lonely at some stage. Additionally smart devices can also be used by sharing their experience with others and thus helping younger generation not making the same mistake which they made. For example, Facebook can be used by old people in connecting with old friends and making new ones along with that they can share their life experiences with others.
Being so many uses which can help old people to use these technology still they are reluctant to do so. Firstly old people find these devices difficult to use. Secondly they consider these gadgets and internet services to be expensive. So to encourage this section of people, mobile phone should be made user friendly and easy to use along with that these services should be cheaper for them or can give additional discount. For instance, people of age above 60 years can get additional 10 percent discount on getting internet recharge.
To conclude, with the changing environment and constant updation in technology old people should be encourage to use internet and new devices by providing easier to use gadgets and cheaper services so that they can connect with people all around the world and share their experiences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y uses for everyone especially for older people but this strata of population is ...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...eryone especially for older people but this strata of population is less percentage...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...d eventually feel lonely at some stage. Additionally smart devices can also be used by shari...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...y uses which can help old people to use these technology still they are reluctant to do so. Firs...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...tion in technology old people should be encourage to use internet and new devices by prov...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...chnology old people should be encourage to use internet and new devices by providing e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98281786942 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50223739939 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484536082474 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7937878935 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457337228435 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204177602277 0.084324248473 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798688427451 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335305321793 0.151304729494 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10337356144 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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