A certain people belifes that this era is a full of options. I strongly support this idea. In this essay I will discuss What choices are available in the current situation and what is the role of technology for multiplaying the options.
Currently, when we look on different fields of areas like education, work, entertaiment, Transportation, Communication, meetings e.t.c are available on different ways. For instance, when we look communication on the previous decades it was held only through writing letter each other; however, currently there are different was of communication; for instance, we can use email, Facebook, Instagram, Skype, e.t.c to communicate each other. When we look on the area of entertainment every thing is changed from the previous one. On the few past years entertainment options was limited but know a days by adding technology assets refreshment things are getting luxury.
Consiquently; we look the role of technology on the multiplication of choices on different staffs. Nowadays, technology is controlling each and every fields of areas. On each and every staff development technology have 80% or more impact. For example we can look the development communication areas, wired phone is changed to wireless, instead of post office we can send our document through electronic media.
To conclude, Generally the current world is a full of options. everything is getting easyier to do currently because of getting different choices to achive our interest.
- Many people think that some individuals are naturally good leader Others think that people can learn leadership skills Discuss both views 56
- The best way to reduce crime among young people is to teach parents good parenting skills To what extent do you agree with this statement Give your own opinion and examples 56
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24358974359 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05492193538 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529914529915 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 234.0 20.2975951904 1153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1227.0 106.682146367 1150% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 234.0 20.7667163134 1127% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 49.0 7.06120827912 694% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133470341725 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133470341725 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908504680918 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501698013214 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 120.3 13.0946893788 919% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -174.49 50.2224549098 -347% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 95.7 11.3001002004 847% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.59 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.95 8.58950901804 221% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 95.6 10.1190380762 945% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 96.0 10.7795591182 891% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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