There are a lot of guys who thought that leadership is a gift of nature however, certain group of people think that quality leadership will come through learning. In my opinion, Leadership academy playing a great role on leaders quality; Although gift of nature will have an impact on quality of leadership.
in this essay I will discuss both ideas.
In the current situation; The GDP of Small institution's, medium company's, large industries, Government institution's depend on the capacity of administrators. Educated leaders will earn different knowledge during their course study. Quality leaders should be disciplined, punctual ,respectful , wise, systematic and also should be aware off the institution that he leads. All this techniques are provided by academic lessons. For instance; if we took the leaders of successful company's they are the output of celebrity academy. So the downfall or up rise of the company is on the hands of one leaders.
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 56
- Many people think that some individuals are naturally good leader Others think that people can learn leadership skills Discuss both views 56
- The best way to reduce crime among young people is to teach parents good parenting skills To what extent do you agree with this statement Give your own opinion and examples 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 152.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32236842105 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97627568029 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710526315789 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1641159291 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17085285591 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567857723856 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665815188174 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113694824847 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690326173418 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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