Certain percentage of people believe that in the present day, people have too Amy options to choose from. I totally agree with this and this essay is going to further elaborate on my opinion.
Basic necessity of any human being is food, clothing and shelter. Let us consider the case of food. In the modern day, because of globalization, cuisines that were previously considered a luxury or even not found easily previously are now very easily available. Be it Chinese noodles, Japanese sushi or Turkish ice cream, everything cuisine from all over the world is readily available giving us a plethora of options to choose from. Now coming to clothing, there are clothes available in every price range from the cheapest brands to the most expensive luxury brands available in the market. If one goes to a mall to get a simple black dress, the will most probably have atleast 10 options to choose from. Thus shopping for clothes, even a basic pyjama has become a very tedious job these days.
When it comes to shelter, it's a total different market and business altogether. People can now choose to live in either an independent house or an apartment. The independent house again has its own sub categories like a condo on the beach or one in the woods or even a house in the heart of the city. Apartments also have a similar classification such as a skyscraper apartment or an apartment facing the ocean. All these classifications make house buying a very difficult task. Not only in food, clothing and shelter, the number of options available in every commodity bot tangible and non tangible is increasing at a very steady pace.
In conclusion, I feel that there are a myriad of Orion's to choose from for anything we need from basic necessities to our luxury cravings and I also believe that the available options will keep increasing even in the coming days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: myriads
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79876160991 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66131082638 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551083591331 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1890088714 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0798832178315 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275411030769 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503454768616 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757040399377 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856785058385 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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