Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
One of the most important aspects of human progress comes from the ability to select what they want more. There is no doubt that today people have a wider range of options in every section of their life compare to previous generations. I will explain some of the most important once in this essay.
To begin with, from the educational and vocational point of view, the opportunities which people have are not comparable with the past. The number of universities across the world equipped individuals with a more unique and special course. Not only do they gain more specialized knowledge about things but they become professional for their future jobs. Because in the past the courses and the number of universities were rare, a lot fewer people had the chance to study in high-level education, so most of the works were based on experimental knowledge. Therefore, now we have more options to choose to continue our education or desired job.
Furthermore, technology and the internet change our social interaction and give us more means of communication tools. These types of communications even change our entertainments and hobbies. For example, the telephone and telegraph were only the way people knew about each other in the past, while now each person has several applications for real-time communication all around the world like Telegram, WhatsApp and Instagram. Also, in comparison with the past, the number of entertainments increase hugely. Although it may confuse people to pick up the best for themselves, all are more satisfied with more options. For example, with an increase in the number of low-price airlines, people can spend their holidays far from home which was impossible for many people in the past.
In conclusion, I completely agree that these days people have more opportunities and options to choose from education, job, international and social communication to types of entertainment. All of them make life more enjoyable.
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 81
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ew, the opportunities which people have are not comparable with the past. The numbe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18960244648 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92566107872 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565749235474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0356545319 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8235294118 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176521335326 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690855466628 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131609947241 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176186675117 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.202530777601 0.056905535591 356% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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