The pie charts indicate the percentage of British pupils who were able to speak another language alongside English at one university in 2000 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that except German which remains unchanged, all of the other languages experienced some changes Frech and Spanish, became less popular in comparison with others.
Looking at the changes in more detail, we can see that students who did not speak any other languages except English increased in 2010, by 5%, from 30 to 35%. This trend is followed by two other categories, where another language and two other different languages( except English, German, and Spanish) gained five percent more speakers reached 20% and 15% in 2010 while these percentages were 15% and 10% in 2000 respectively.
Students who spoke German besides English have remained the same as were in 2000, about 10 percent of all students in the university spoke German for two years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... except German which remains unchanged, all of the other languages experienced some change...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ercent more speakers reached 20% and 15% in 2010 while these percentages were 15%...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06535947712 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49963900166 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7382732454 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 76.5299724578 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.6 16.8248392259 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31104822654 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183600249093 0.0766984524023 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118410410246 0.0603063233224 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199841662744 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129684161031 0.0580467560999 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 8.37731958763 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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