Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
It is cardinal equivocal piece of information that, Sport person and entertainment faces are getting more money by their work and promotions whereas some people thinks that professional degree holder should earn more money as compare to other. I agree that, Professional person is playing cardinal role in country’s development that why we can to pay them higher than other. This essay going to elaborate both side with examples and tenable conclusion.
On the agree side, People have to do lot of education who want to be a profession degree holder along this his/her parent have to spend more money as compare to other cost in other words, if one person who want to be a doctor then he need to do hard work in study. According to experts say, if any student wants to be a doctor then student must be study at least 12 hours per day. Beside this when parents want to be doctor to their child then cost of course is very high which is do not affordable for some people. Another point is, Professional courses are playing momentous role to develop nation. For Example, Engineer are fall under profession course and engineer can build very good innovative ideas to develop nation however engineers are not so popular as compare to sport person or actor.
Furthermore, Sport person and famous personalities always on top to gain higher money because they are use in advertisement which not always selling right product to customer however, due to their famous personalities some company offer then higher pay but is it worth? Why company pay higher money for their 30 seconds role in company? Because they are role model and people likes to follow them.
Conclusion, if profession course is playing cardinal role to develop nation and it has high expense with lot of practice to be a professional person then why not they cannot get higher payment to their work. They should be pay more than sport man and entertainer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, whereas, as to, at least, for example, of course, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83685800604 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57810336354 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516616314199 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7549701569 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16749579436 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672164317391 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594066709433 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110347125277 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454780923744 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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