Some people believe that radio is the best way to get news while others think that TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views, give your opinion and relevant examples

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Some people believe that radio is the best way to get news while others think that TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views, give your opinion and relevant examples

It is claimed by some people that radio is one of the most prominent ways to fetch any kind of news happening across the world. On the other hand, some people aver Television as the vital source to find out latest activities or news around the world. I will discuss both the views including my opinion on this notion in subsequent paragraphs:

Radio has been the constant source of spreading news from ancient times and considered as one of the most trusted resource of providing liable information. Additionally, it is a portable device that can be taken anywhere with ease and easily integrated in cars and phones. For example, in a recent survey conducted by the local radio channel, shows that most of the daily travelers loves to listen radio during their journey from home to office and vice versa. Since they believe it keeps them motivated all the day by listening to some good stuff on radio. Needless to say, radio makes the travelling journey even more excited by offering the mix of news and some enthralling songs.

On the flip side of the coin, Television is the invention of one of the technological advancements in this contemporary world and everyone has welcomed it with open hands. Having said that, TV presents the news in a more dramatic way with the help of engaging visuals which helps in understanding the news in a better way. For example, it is one of the best way to represent any information to children who are in their learning stage & tend to understand things easily with the help of visuals. Apart from this, TV serves the purpose of entertaining material to those who loves to spend most of their time at home.

In my opinion, both the objects have their own importance and serves in a different way. Though the purpose of both is same, but the way of representation of things is not similar. Radio is best for those who usually travels a lot and want to listen the news just to be aware about the latest happenings, whereas Television is the best source of information to those who prefers to know the things in a more detailed way.

To encapsulate, it is concluded that both the ways have their own importance in daily lives and are serving people based on their interest and preferences with TV taking little more benefit because of the supporting visuals.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ney from home to office and vice versa. Since they believe it keeps them motivated al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, apart from, for example, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8078817734 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8500338883 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514778325123 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7657115173 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.133333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0666666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269027035491 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860901543745 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374418327029 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144260313953 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410570086368 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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