Some people believe that schoolchildren should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
In this modern era of globalisation, education plays a significant role in an individual’s life. It acts as a foundation for the child’s future. some people opine that a child should not be burdened with extra homework while some believe that extra work can be beneficial for their education. However, I am in favour of
the latter viewpoint.
Firstly, homework can have many benefits. It can inculcate good habits in a child and can make the child more disciplined towards his studies. This method can develop a sense of responsibility within a juvenile by doing the assignment by himself at home. Children are forced to work away from the environment of the school in order to get a sense of individuality. Secondly, it can improve the time management skills in a child that helps them
to tackle the challenges, later in their life when they have to meet the deadlines in the corporate world.
On the other hand, when children are not given projects to complete at home, they can indulge in extra-curricular activities like sports, drawing or anything constructive of their interest. These activities can help them to be physically and mentally fit. Moreover, after studying for long hours in school, children may need some time to relax and rejuvenate themselves so that they can start the next day refresh and can able to concentrate better.
To conclude, I would say that some amount of extra work is necessary for a child to understand and memorize work that has been done at school. Also, they will take their studies seriously or else, they will feel burdened at the time of examination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...foundation for the child's future. some people opine that a child should not be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92647058824 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9485110752 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1422466385 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7142857143 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148873827754 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504238415924 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600840602128 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670773175709 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733153512451 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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