Some people believe that subjects such as art, music, drama and creative writing have a bright future. Therefore, schools should spend more time teaching these subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today’s modern world, education has become primary for any person to survive. It is now been seen as a way of earning rather than personality development. And because of this, which subjects needs to be taught more in educational institutes has become a crucial subject of matter. Some believe arts related subjects like literature, music, and painting required to get more attention, while others prefer traditional subjects. However, I believe that interest of a child should be the prime factor in deciding which one should get more attention.
One part of the society believes that in th...
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school 69
- Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more pe 74
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
- You rented a car from car rental company the air conditioner has stopped working You phoned the company a week ago but it has still not been repaired Introduce yourself Explain the situation Say what action you would like the company to take 61
- Politicians are more responsible for protection of the environment than individuals To what extent do you agree or disagree 91
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...he harmony and peace among the society. Also due to the awareness among communities ...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...eve that both development of the globe, as well as individual, is trivial and the choice n...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239234449761 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.162679425837 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0956937799043 0.0946595960268 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0382775119617 0.0501214627716 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0287081339713 0.0437548338989 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126794258373 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0526315789474 0.0403226058552 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65685394572 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0406698564593 0.0326793684256 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0956937799043 0.0861772015684 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0167464114833 0.021408717616 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0143540669856 0.011925033212 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2200.0 1933.35771543 114% => OK
No of words: 375.0 316.048096192 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86666666667 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24 0.28420135186 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16 0.203846283523 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65685394572 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 57.9163833192 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.4375 20.7743622355 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1157991788 49.517814964 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 127.492653851 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7743622355 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 47.4375 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.82291666667 1.69124875643 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172609418533 0.332605444948 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12251053879 0.102741220458 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0596636428166 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.547613280293 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128525600361 0.148594505496 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800478595416 0.134430193775 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456516062084 0.0742795772207 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.426227609287 0.324371583561 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.114556352192 0.0638462369009 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131658914216 0.228012699653 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352872730503 0.058150111329 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.