Some people believe that success in life depends on hard work and determination, While others believe that other factor like money and personal appearance are essential.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is irrefutable that Success plays an imperative role in building a successful career of a person. Many individuals believe that dedication and perseverance play an indispensable part to be successful in life. Although, others opine that the attributes in terms of commercial and personal features are equally vital to be mentioned This essay would analyse both the views in detail and conclude with my opinion
To embark upon, the most compelling reason associated with the belief behind that an attractive personality and wealth attract a plethora of people toward it. As, It is considered that individuals with charming personage and gargantuan wealth can always charm numerous people in one and other ways. For example, Queen Elizabeth of England was born in a rich family of a Duke, to marry a prince and till date she is Known to be having an enigmatic personality these traits are sincerely appreciated by masses. When they showcase themselves publically, and in many cases, they are worshipped like an idol gives a visible indication toward their appealing factor. Therefore, charming personality may be considered as the imperial factor to obtain success in life.
On the other side, there are people who come up with valid and authentic reasons in favour of those hardworking individuals who get success due to their commitments toward life. There is no denying the fact that people appraise those who succeed in their life by facing loads of issues during their career, yet they never gave u and continued to further learn from their mistakes. Great Leaders, for citation, like, for instance Oprah Winfrey who is currently an actress, talk show host, television producer and philanthropist. She is the first black woman who comes from a poor family, had a tough childhood suffered a lot, however it was her firm resolution to make her mark in her life. Thus, the sacrifice and dedication toward their compelling work cannot be denied which is even commemorated by the society.
To recapitulate, I definitely believe that a firm resolve and lots of diligence can make any average person also highly successful as compared to, people who rely on enticing looks wealth as these are ephemeral factors of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1095890411 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80905968043 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1823173731 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.461538462 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215517341932 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075166239846 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461419808855 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137776447811 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425574334021 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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