There is an argument about whether mental strength or physical strength is more important. While the power of spirit occupies a certain position in sport, I would argue that both of them play the same importance.
On the one hand, to succeed in the athletic field, firstly, athletes need a strong body. As simple as, they are already exhausted when the match just starts for a half, how can they win in that situation? In all the games we have seen, it’s also clear that people who are more physically fit will easily have more advantages than the smaller ones. For instance, in a basketball match, we can see that the taller guys can easily throw the ball into the basket with just a backstroke, while the shorter ones can meet it more difficult when they just can stand under the basket and throw with the higher risk ratio. Moreover, throwing the ball from a long distance offers strong hand strength, which is not possible with weak people.
However, people can’t win the match with just the advantages of their body. Mental strength is the most important factor during the practice, because if they lose their will, they won’t be able to reach any further. Even when they in the real match, whenever they almost worn out, their determination will wake them up. Many top sports player such as Christiano Ronaldo or Lionel Messi have to prepare the strong determine to face up with all the pressure and difficulty they will meet on the field. And mental strength played an important part into the successful they are today.
In conclusion, sports players have to face both physical and mental difficulties on the field. So it is essential to build for them the physical fit and mentally resilient in the start.
- Some people believe that successful sports teams are always those with the strongest or fittest players Others think that success depends more on the team s mental strength Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Many employers are now offering their employees the option to work from home As a result employees will have much more flexible working hours in the future Is this a positive or negative development 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33811652594 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1583802867 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135880452693 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556030481187 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438443829782 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952339768268 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226592396483 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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