Some people believe that teachers have an important role to play in educational success whereas others believe that it is the student’s attitude that matters. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether educational success depends on good teachers, or whether it is the attitude of students that counts. I believe that both are important factors, which contribute to academic achievements, but the latter is even more important, and neither should be overlooked at the expense of the other.
It is true that teachers play a vital role in the brilliant academic careers of students because of the best teaching practices and guidance they provide. With regard to the former, their high qualification and several years of teaching experience help learners to gain knowledge and learn as much as they can in the classroom through interactive sessions. These lessons, along with feedback to correct one's mistakes, enable them to score higher in exams. As for providing career guidance, not only do professors impart knowledge to their pupils, but they also guide them to identify their area of interest, and motivate them to achieve their goals by making them aware of their true potential. For these reasons, teachers play a significant role in the educational success of students.
However, teachers are just one important factor in deciding one's academic success, and one's eagerness to learn is of greater importance because tutors can only show the right direction, but it is the individual attitude that makes a difference. The evidence for this can be seen in the fact that despite having the same tutor for one batch of students, not everyone obtains excellent scores, which means that there are some who do not pay attention in the class, and neither do they learn from their mistakes. Another example is of successful entrepreneurs like Richard Branson and Steve Jobs who dropped out of college and were still able to conquer the world through their sheer will, dedication and positive attitude to learn.
In conclusion, I agree that the role of teachers is important, but that sincere efforts to learn anything are even more important. Youngsters should grasp as much as they can from their trainers, and should also have never to quit attitude to succeed in their academic careers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... in deciding ones academic success, and ones eagerness to learn is of greater import...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, as for, in conclusion, it is true, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11206896552 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65058287475 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548850574713 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9197713992 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.25 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178490717296 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723538506735 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625532352965 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115111437066 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591706856035 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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