Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development, while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your opinion.
Many are of the opinion that homeschooling is best suited for children, however, another belief is the necessity of children going to the school for their development. In my opinion, learning from home is suitable only for early ages and for compensation of studies in the cases that are otherwise impossible while school going studies are the best-recommended practice in all other general considerations.
On the one hand, homeschooling lends a child the most attention one can get vis a vis school. This ensures the needed care for special children who may be mentally or physically challenged and prepares the young buds for schools with a headstart. In addition to that, for children engaged in regular sports or co-curricular activities lessons can be recouped only with the help of private schooling. In these cases, the planning and scheduling of subjects, teachers and timings are flexible according to the tutee's needs which is otherwise not possible. Thus, in special cases, learning from home stands out with an edge against regular school studies.
On the other hand, vast learning facilities and specially trained teachers for each subject are pivotal to prefer regular schooling for the all-round development of students. In other words, the level of training children gets at school and the access to technologies and the extensive array of knowledge outcast most of the advantages of home studies. Moreover, cooperation and mingling with different people and counterparts improve and fine-tune the team building and socializing abilities of scholars to a great extent. This makes sense why the school is inevitable for a child.
In conclusion, even though homeschooling has got some advantages over regular schooling, in my opinion, the infinite learning possibilities and professional goal oriented functioning reiterate and confirm the significance of schools over home learning.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44594594595 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0399098445 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2196705489 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350302259383 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123770915597 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925298649886 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209136140373 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102147864866 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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