Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Today’ is the world of technology. Communication and interaction has been made so easy and convenient that world has turned into a global village. Distances have been reduced and access has been granted to far off areas. Innovation and development of technology have made it more convenient for people to communicate and interact. In the upcoming paragraphs I shall be supporting the opinion that advancement of technology has caused an increase in socialization.
Everyday new gadgets and technologies are being discovered, improving the modes and standards of communication providing people with opportunities to keep in touch with each other. Mobile phones and computers have made it possible by the use of internet to reach far off areas. Video and audio calls and messages have made it easy to communicate and socialize with people living in distant areas. Official and personal meetings are being held via audio and visual aids instead of people needing to travel to mark their presence. It is just the matter of nanoseconds now that you can reach your loved ones living thousands of miles away from you. Social media platforms have provided people an opportunity to meet and people belonging to different races, ethnicities and cultures, raising international interaction, allowing people to befriend and understand other cultures and nations.
In the past, people had o travel to meet with each other which would require time as well as resources. From professional to personal meetings, it was quiet difficult to make time and arrangements to be physically present. People were unable to talk to their relatives and friends living in different regions of the world.
I shall pen down with this statement that recent technologies have made the world a better place by giving people access to each other while living and performing their routine duties. This has made man socially more active and raised the standard of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...conds now that you can reach your loved ones living thousands of miles away from you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27564102564 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87532513955 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560897435897 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5248169663 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248681461187 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812392632035 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070528077785 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153568980886 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728687059603 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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