Some people believe that teenagers are facing more problems in their life than they did in the past and this is because parents are spending more time at work than at home.
Do you agree or disagree?
These days parents are expected to work extended hours for earning extra income, at times this leads to juveniles getting neglected and are believed to face problems in life.In my opinion, parents are responsible for the guiding and mentoring the m and help them build their future.
Due westernization, nuclear families are norm of the day, where yearn to be their parents and don’t have their time and attention.Often, deserted youths are adversely diverted to immoral activities like drug addiction and crime.Due to easy access to unfiltered adult content, youngster get information at a click of few buttons using technology.Adult monitoring and supervision become imperative to train such adolescents to not get misguided. Parents find alternate and cheaper substitute to their involvement in their children’s life by way of engaging a caretaker for their kids in their absence, who are not bothered to report or even correct these young children.
However, with rising prices and needs of the family, both parents are forced to stay longer hours at workplace to keep up their jobs and take up more responsibility and are frequently expected to dedicate their weekends.It is morally a responsibility of parents to both give physically and inculcate moral virtues in their children and spend quality family times, which is becoming impossible.Also, teenagers don’t like overbearing parents, which ruins harmony of the family.Sometimes, youngsters are rebellious and due to their hormonal changes undertake risky actions.
In conclusion, mothers and fathers, in principal, do owe a primary responsibility of guiding and building up a responsible and caring human being, albeit, they can not be control all the actions of their young children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
These days parents are expected to work extended hours for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5625 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21967318454 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.034671935 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 302.6 106.682146367 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.4 20.7667163134 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210919539746 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110077518406 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524103201313 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123538969271 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534619977705 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.66 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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