People remember special gifts or presents that they receive. Why?
Presents are considered as a token of felicitation for a loved one’s achievements and it is given during an important occasion in a person’s life. People, in general, love receiving precious gifts and fondly remember the person who has presented that gift. Whether all the gifts hold that special value to the receiver? This essay discusses this conundrum in details.
Gifts are usually offered to celebrate someone’s important achievement. When one graduate from university, the heirloom gifts like a Rolex-watch received from elders is always treasured. In many countries, newly married couples are showered with a lot of gifts. In India, during weddings, people receive expensive gifts like gold jewellery and silk clothes. People preserve their gifts given by the loved ones and depending on the value of the gift.
Often, contradictory is also possible, when you have received unwanted things as gifts, such as a flashy and preppy cardigan for your birthday from your aunt. You would either ask for a receipt of purchase and exchange or regift it to someone else. Sometimes, you receive presents from your boyfriend during your courtship period, when that relationship is no more, the recipient would either want to discard or return the gift given to eraser the memories of the person.
Based on the aforementioned discussion, it can be concluded that the gifts will be valuable to the beneficiary if it is received from a loved one and is expensive enough to be cherished.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7828085936 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9128330346 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8571428571 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202882367483 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676635167806 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759349874196 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119500122029 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481930432668 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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