Some people believe that university education is helpful, while others think that the university is not the right place to acquire new skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion including reasons and relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In a recent generation, people tend to keep studying a higher education. They attend to university for various reasons such as gaining knowledge, obtaining a higher degree, or fulfilling the dream of having a prestigious occupation. However, many assert that university is not an appropriate place for juveniles as it does not educate them practical skills which is beneficial for their future lives.
Those who do not believe in university degree notion that university‘s curriculum embraces various theoretical courses which do not prepare students for the mature adolescents. In addition, the youth need skills instead of these subjects. For instance, it is absolutely vital for girls to have cookery abilities in order to acting as future mothers to cater their children. These skills do not exist in university courses. Thus, a university does not produce the results we hope for while it is not offering students hands-on skills.
I greatly appreciate the requirement of practical skills, however, attending university has various positive ramifications. University brings about people mental, social, and economic improvements by opening new doors to science, interacting with new people, and providing numerous job opportunities. Besides, a university makes an academic atmosphere for students in order to impart their knowledge as well as interchange their values. It is blatantly obvious that the advantages of joining university outweigh its minimal disadvantages. In conclusion, university purpose is not merely passing new skills to students, however, a variety of improvements have made while students are educating there.
To sum up, not only university is a proper place to learn novel skills which is essential for the future career and life, but also is it a great place for enriching the people abilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ree, or fulfilling the dream of having a prestigious occupation. However, many as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55871886121 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09070994063 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0773901965 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19614738734 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741439489728 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415985529815 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124613517057 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290621579422 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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