Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for charity, improve the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Unpaid community service is a controversial issues among the people, in fact they emphasize that, high school children should be obligated to do such activities compulsorily and free. Although it is better for student to be involved in community service even free, I reckon voluntary collaboration could be more effective.
Nowadays with growing urbanization the volume of community services is also increased and Different plan is made to do them. Take as an illustration, persuading the high school children to do the same activities which may be a good opportunity, and its outcome will be win-win for society and students. On the one side, young learner are engaged to social activity, which lead them to improve their social skills, moreover they will be experienced and their social intelligence will be optimized. On the other side, society will be able to cope such services as free as possible, furthermore, the future of the community will be vouched, inasmuch as better town folks that will have been trained.
On the other hand, obligatory type of this activity should be investigated. I think, it is better for a society to lead people to work voluntary instead of compulsory. In other word, if young people motivate to do work optional, responsibility in them will be growth and they would be a better people for community. Conversely, compulsory type of activity, impose a burden on student specially emotionally and not only are they not willing to do social activity well, but also, they may become irresponsible in future. So that, the society miss this chance to have a good member.
Consequently, I could infer, we should stimulate young people, to take part in community services voluntary instead of compulsory, until, they learn the manner of living and society has a good members too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, i reckon, i think, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09395973154 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92920537572 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523489932886 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8572963567 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237746700794 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973569318596 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593194193916 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154279937868 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561041238397 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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