A healthy diet plays a very important role in keeping people healthy. Some people argue that fish and meat should not be eaten for their own benefit as well as for the benefit of the world. I agree with this argument considering the advantages of a vegetarian diet.
To begin with, vegetable and fruits are a great source of vitamin and minerals that are essential for keeping us healthy. For example, people having plenty of fruits have better immunity as fruits contain Vitamin C which is the key element to the immune system. Moreover, unlike red meat, vegetables have no cholesterol, which is a major contributor to heart disease, help to keep us healthy. Even dietitians around the world recommend to go vegan to patients, suffering from lifestyle disease or illness related to lever or guts, due to the fact that vegetarian diet has good nutrition as well as is friendly to the gut. Hence, it is clearly evident that not eating meat and fish have positive sides to it.
Secondly, a tremendous amount of fresh water is required to process meat and beef, which contributes to ongoing water scarcity. Also, it is believed that the production of meat contributes to the greenhouse gases causing a rise in an existing environmental problem. Additionally, there is a school of thought, which is also very important, that argues the killing of animals is not justified for food when many alternatives food choices are available. Keeping all the points in consideration, promoting a vegetarian diet certainly has a positive impact on the environment and it also creates compassion amount people to save lives.
To conclude, I support the belief that vegetarian people not only benefit themselves, which they certainly do but also saves many animal lives and environment and ultimately the world as a whole.
- In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 73
- Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places? 73
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.Discuss both these views and five your own opinion 73
- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.Which viewpoint do you agree with? 84
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'play'?
Suggestion: play
A healthy diet plays a very important role in keeping people...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend going', 'recommend gonna'.
Suggestion: recommend going; recommend gonna
...althy. Even dietitians around the world recommend to go vegan to patients, suffering from lifes...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'alternatives'' or 'alternative's'?
Suggestion: alternatives'; alternative's
...als is not justified for food when many alternatives food choices are available. Keeping all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01986754967 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80117576672 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0877732185 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.615384615 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223136127149 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738477713504 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757405459406 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139502399027 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591483310317 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.