some people claim that there are more disadvantages to the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
In our lives, People need a means to transportation to commute from one place to another. In past times, forks used horses and donkeys for their destination. with the development of science and technology, now the transportation modes are increasing day by day. having an own car has both advantages and the disadvantages. According to my opinion, there are more demerits in the car than merits. Let trigger debate on it.
private car have enormous benefits. car is a more convenient source of traveling. it plays a major role in the establishment and growth of the transportation industry which helps in contribute to national gross domestic product. On the other hand, it is a pleasant more easiest vehicle for the family because it has a comfortable seat, ventilation, air conditioning, and other amusing feature.
On the other hand, public transport is fulfilled with the crowd, noise and more disgusting. Moreover, the utilization of private cars has not cost-effective. it includes various expenses like driver's salary, cost of fossil fuel, repairing, damaging, price of a car, insurance charges, etc. so while buying a car, these factors should be considered. Hence, it is out of reach of the middle-class. However, it is also major reason for traffic, jams, and the occurrence of accidents. Along with, a car immensely affects the ecosystem it gives birth to environment hurdles e.g. Global warming, Greenhouse effect.
Consequently, it is clear that the advantages of a car are overweighing the disadvantages. public transport is more accessible, safer and cost-effective. so the idea of purchasing a should be curtailed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, e.g., hence, however, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34099616858 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26673236543 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624521072797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8692283619 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.05 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219635642028 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682259819832 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678487544012 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131596731212 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245054795957 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.8 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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