Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages ?
Do you agree or disagree?
Discuss advantages and disadvantages of having a car?
Transportation is developing considerably with technology improvement and innovations. The car has become a necessity in this fast-moving modern, however, some people argue that car has more cons than pros, which I disagree upon. Both sides of views are expressed in this essay.
Undoubtedly, cars have provided a surge in time efficiency and comfortability in the way people commute. To illustrate, owning a car has reduced the dependency on other modes of transport for viable travel, moreover, the startups like UBER, OLA, Taxi Service, where car pick's up from the doorstep to the desired location whenever required as per convenience. Reliability of these services is increasing tremendously, additionally, the employment generated by car services is also significant.
Whereas the pollution caused by the cars is inclining day-by-day, due to increase in number on roads to meet the high demands of the population. Recent statistic shows that the rise in pollution in cities is majorly due to exhaust gases emitted from the cars, authorities are taking notable action to preclude the issue by taking certain measures.
Implementing the strict gas emission norms for the vehicles, further, the innovation of electric car is curbing the major issues caused by the cars. As well as with the improvement in city infrastructure and recognizing the problems caused by the cars, commuters are taking necessary actions like, carpooling, using public transport, etc. evade the problems caused by massive use of gasoline cars.
To summarise, there are certain disadvantages of the car usages, but the advantages of this mode of transport outweigh the negative side of it. Nevertheless, with more scientific involvement the usages of car will not be regrettable in coming future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... by car services is also significant Whereas the pollution caused by the cars is inc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31046931408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00979559569 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 277.0 20.2975951904 1365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1471.0 106.682146367 1379% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 277.0 20.7667163134 1334% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 77.0 7.06120827912 1090% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276732901222 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.276732901222 0.084324248473 328% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145508382264 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534822095671 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 142.1 13.0946893788 1085% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -218.14 50.2224549098 -434% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 112.5 11.3001002004 996% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.0 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.56 8.58950901804 263% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 9.78957915832 644% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 112.8 10.1190380762 1115% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 113.0 10.7795591182 1048% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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