Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance?
Many people believe that computers are obstacle instead of support. Others, however, opine that computer technology has improved the capacity and capability of human work prospect. It is undeniable that computer has improved our lives but on the flip side it has its own disadvantages.
To begin with, computer has revolutionized our lives in many ways. From the point of education to professional career, it has been used everywhere. It has also improved the method of communication, for example, video calling, messaging, email, which has brought all the nations together and opened the gate of global business to grow economically. However, on the other side, every technology has its demerits also.
On the other hand it is the primary reason of isolation and diseases. Youth, nowadays, spend their maximum time with computer to play electronic games and often get addicted to fascinating gaming experience. In this case, they less seems to be socialize and lead towards isolation. This can be later, major cause of depression and chronic circadian misalignment. Secondly, it deprived youngsters and adults from outdoor activities. People often sit in front of computer whole day and face serious diseases like obesity, arthritis, poor eyesight. In addition, people are highly dependent on computers. Children complete their assignments on computer and they are lacking creativity. Trend of penmanship is also becoming out of fashion and people with high typing speed and skill sets are getting better compensation.
To conclude, it is unquestionable that computer has become integral part of everyone’s life; student or professional because of its effectiveness. It has simplified many complex work and evolved entire education system but not without the cost. People are engrossed into computer and their social life is barely left. Lastly, indolence cause by computer overuse is health hazardous.
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- Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skill more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...side, every technology has its demerits also. On the other hand it is the primary...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50847457627 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97064833129 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.050104022 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197821227274 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056455233858 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414292891311 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113397068499 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468730912608 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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