At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compare with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In the current decade, many countries have higher youth population than the elder ones and it has been proclaimed that such nations will benefit out of it in near future than the countries with less young generation. While there is a valid argument to the contrary, I personally concur with the above statement because of the two primary reasons.
To begin with, the large number of youngster is the significance of the young country, which results in more novice scholars. The novelty of new generation proliferate the revolution in every field be it science, technology, agriculture or politics. New ideas and fresh-minds give birth to evolution and tailor the communities’ redundant practices. Furthermore, the country will have prodigious number of working professionals instead of retired senior-citizens, which can be the chief reason of skyrocket economic (GDP) and income per capita growth. A country like Japan is a salient example of old nation, and it is well-known fact worldwide that this condition will certainly jeopardize its financial growth.
Secondly, the lesser old population and large number of young generation will provide the right equilibrium to country’s burden.
The older population needs more care than young ones and also the better medical and old age facilities. In many countries the government authorities invest a considerable amount of money to look after their senior citizens. For instance, sanatorium, old age home, pension scheme, and free medical checkups, such things consume plenty of time, effort and money.
To conclude, it is clear that the country with great number of youth populous have far more benefits than a nation with older people. New working professional and generation bring prosperity to the country and on the contrary, there is less responsibility on the central authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42214532872 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02906345137 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3285646863 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.538461538 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225053180209 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772379044659 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720728957949 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134830523139 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472525189665 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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