Some people encourage young children to leave their parents’ house as soon as they become adults while other say children should stay at their parents’ house as long as possible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
There are two dimensions of the topic, there is a group of people who asserts that adolescents should stay with their parent’s for longer times; whereas, another group is of the view that as soon as children reach a mature age, they should get separated. I shall discuss both the perspectives in detail before reaching a final verdict.
To begin with, in order to achieve the maturity and self-dependency at an early age, it is a rational approach to getting seperated from the parent’s after reaching an adult stage. Parent’s should incourage their children to be self-sufficient and behave as a responsible person. For instance, adolescents dependent on their parent’s do not take their future seriously as they enjoy luxuries of life at their parent’s place. Thus, to become a self-made person, it is essential for the children to reduce their parent’s burden and take their own responsibility.
On the contrast, parent’s affiliation and supervision cannot be negated. Children leaving their parent’s house at an early age can go astray and cannot be benefited from their guidance and care. Without strict supervision, children can be trapped in the wrong hands leading to a destructive future. An evident example is of the western countries where younge people lives seperate from their parents and get involved into criminal activities easily.
To conclude, in my opinion, it is of utmost importance that children should spend as much time with the parent’s as possible to receive love, affection and rational career advise. One cannot overlook the Importance of self-dependence and responsibility by staying separate. However, living with parent’s outweighs living alone owing to the numerous beneficial factors stated above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, thus, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49818181818 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2229220354 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3727519899 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443906680342 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158457840767 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942193961292 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258666709156 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667362038221 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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