Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life.Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life.
We have many examples in our lives where we encounter some great personalities who were not doing good in their early school lives. Most of them were expelled or failed in their schools. However, as they grew, their lives changed dramatically and became the well-known people. Below we will see the facts and their reasons of being successful.
First of all undoubtedly, their fate come in their way to brought them success but of course fate does not work all the time for you the hard work and self-determination are two major factors to reach the goal. Latest example we have is the founder of the Microsoft who was the Harvard drop out now is the top 3 richest men on the face of this earth. May be the luck strike out for but also his focus and hard work also help him to purge the hurdle from his way. Likewise, Albert Einstein is one of the greatest scientist of all time created history by producing the light bulb with his non-stop efforts.
In addition to that, we often face challenges in our lives where we face tough decisions and therefore right decision at the right time is equally very important. If you make one wrong decision in your life and there is a greater chance that that opportunity would slip through from your hand and then it will take years to come back in the game.
All an all, focusing on every opportunity, recognize your strength and overcome your inner-self lacking are very essential to ensure your success. Other thing is procrastination that need to be refrained if you want to prove your worth to this world. Always believe in yourself and do not let any tell you that you cannot do it. If you have a dream you need to protect it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Latest'.
Suggestion: The Latest
...re two major factors to reach the goal. Latest example we have is the founder of the M...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...hest men on the face of this earth. May be the luck strike out for but also his fo...
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Line 7, column 330, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...let any tell you that you cannot do it. If you have a dream you need to protect it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, may, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54276315789 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46018986934 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6357887239 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134208738399 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472582947751 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411934323789 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735187316025 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039295872855 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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