Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life.
Why do you think that is the case?
What is the most important thing to succeed in life.
Nowadays, education has become irreplaceable part in the life of the younger generation because many people believe that the youth are bound fail without a college degree. Contrary to the common belief, some folks end up being successful in the life, even after failing in the academics.
One of the main reasons for this case is, a child's subject of interest could be something else apart form the studies, like the acting or the sports. If a kid is planning to become an athlete or an actor, forcing him or her to study will not yield the desired results in either of the scenarios. There are numbers of celebrities on the planet that proved, failing in studies is not the end of the road. For example,The cricket super star, Sachin Tendulkar did not even complete the school and yet he is one of the most successful and the richest sports persons in the country.
The two most important criteria to have a great career are the skills and the hard work. Anyone who works hard and do best in what they love, success will be always in the reach and it also proves that the success in academia is not the golden rule for the happy life. Steve jobs is one of the greatest tech Mughals that world has ever seen, he did not graduate from the university and yet, he changed the way the humans have been communicating in the 21st century. His skills and the attitude towards achieving the target made all the difference in his life.
To conclude, schooling is important for the foundation, but it is not the only path to the happy and great life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53571428571 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36943763241 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.1120844681 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.454545455 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301203739495 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100405304145 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833630794099 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171692358355 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065140543892 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.