If we look current situation, that our lives are surrounded by technologies such as a smart pones, computers, internet, calculator and so on. In other words we can say without technologies we can't imagine to easily survive in these world and we can also see that how that technologies are more impact on our life. Due this effectiveness there are lots off debates between humans relate to advantages and disadvantages of these technology.
If we look back 4 to 5 decades on development of countries and human life we can see, that how to human life country are gradually developed. According to me there is two most and major development. First one is electricity, in past the countries are produce electricity by coal and other limited sources and due to this limited sources the industries and households are every time affected from shortage of electricity. After the came of nuclear technology countries are able to produce electricity according to demand and due to these we can see easily to increase in industrial outputs, and due to these industrial output countries are had move to economy development.
And the second major development on communication, at the same if we look back last few decade our method of communication through post and by trunk calls. After the came of internet we communicate easily with any part of world in few seconds.
There are also some most major technologies in terms of machinery, which help to countries and industries to there economic development in the field of infrastructure, education, health.
There is some also adverse effect of these technologies such as nuclear power, we can see that most of developed countries who's produce very dangerous nuclear weapons which was not good for our world. The second and major problem unemployment, due to robotics technology lots of work done by machinery and due to this robotics culture qualified persons are not getting job easily.
And one of the most and major problem on pollution, due to technology development most of industries produce waste which is very difficult to recycle and dispose.
In conclusion I can say that it's depend on country and human that in what extent he can use any technology for his or him development where he should not feel after some time that these technology should not be use.
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- Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 56
- In many countries, government spends valuable amount of money in improving the internet access?Why is this happening?Is it appropriate that government spend money on this? 61
- Some people think that large impressive buildings are important for a city Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals Discuss both these views and give your opinion 79
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'pone'?
Suggestion: pone
...rounded by technologies such as a smart pones, computers, internet, calculator and so...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ords we can say without technologies we cant imagine to easily survive in these worl...
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Line 1, column 422, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...late to advantages and disadvantages of these technology. If we look back 4 to 5 decades on...
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Line 1, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and disadvantages of these technology. If we look back 4 to 5 decades on develo...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...n life country are gradually developed. According to me there is two most and major development...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty by coal and other limited sources and due to this limited sources the industri...
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Line 3, column 644, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hese industrial output countries are had move to economy development. And the...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun decade seems to be countable; consider using: 'few decades'.
Suggestion: few decades
...ation, at the same if we look back last few decade our method of communication through pos...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cation through post and by trunk calls. After the came of internet we communicate eas...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...an see that most of developed countries whos produce very dangerous nuclear weapons ...
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Line 11, column 83, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the industries') or simply say ''most industries''.
Suggestion: most of the industries; most industries
...ollution, due to technology development most of industries produce waste which is very difficult t...
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Line 13, column 181, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...he should not feel after some time that these technology should not be use.
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at these technology should not be use.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245192307692 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.125 0.155533422707 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110576923077 0.0946595960268 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0480769230769 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0504807692308 0.0437548338989 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132211538462 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0216346153846 0.0403226058552 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93936039222 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0432692307692 0.0326793684256 132% => OK
Particles: 0.00240384615385 0.00163938923432 147% => OK
Determiners: 0.0649038461538 0.0861772015684 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0216346153846 0.021408717616 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192307692308 0.011925033212 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2332.0 1933.35771543 121% => OK
No of words: 388.0 316.048096192 123% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01030927835 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317010309278 0.374742101984 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262886597938 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180412371134 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154639175258 0.137316102897 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93936039222 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469072164948 0.56093040696 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.8612190412 60.7387585426 82% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.7142857143 20.7743622355 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1907696559 49.517814964 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.571428571 127.492653851 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 20.7743622355 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38877755511 159% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 54.0029455081 49.1944974215 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.78494623656 1.69124875643 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245764004287 0.332605444948 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132335348087 0.102741220458 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0759125894872 0.0668466124924 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.699647103308 0.534860350844 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192535199301 0.148594505496 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116073784587 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274232052566 0.0742795772207 37% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.257456216979 0.324371583561 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.102396502771 0.0638462369009 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1503451467 0.228012699653 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280327954003 0.058150111329 48% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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