Some people feel that the age at which people can marry should be at least 25.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The idea of committing to marital life only after reaching 25 years of age has gained a lot of momentum among few people. This essay will explain why I completely agree with this thought as a not only a happy marriage demands enormous dedication but also because the education is more imperative at the younger age.
Firstly, owing to the profound importance given to academics in this contemporary world, the years dedicated to acquire tertiary and higher level of education has increased exponentially. This education helps an individual to develop cognitively. For example, a study carried by the magazine 'age UK' revealed that 86% of the youngsters who are above 18 but below 25 are still trying to figure out what they want to do in life. Thereby, these delicate years should be attributed to education rather than taking responsibilities that come with marriage.
Secondly, the level of commitment and the countless sacrifices that are needed to make a marriage work is not a piece of cake and the will to do so conspicuously comes with age. To enunciate, the more a person has seen life, the more experiences are gained, and the better is the ability to endure the hardships of marriage. To exemplify, in the USA, more than 79% of divorce cases are that of very young couples who are not able to make the adjustments to live under a same roof. In other words, post millennial lack high tolerance threshold and hence have little will to keep commitments and to forgo certain things to have a successful marriage.
To reiterate, I believe that adults below age of 25 should be refrained from committing to a marriage as they may not be ready to take the heavy baggage of marital life. Instead this crucial phase of life should better attributed for attaining proper education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84967320261 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78828462737 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4506548319 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121843585901 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404270715517 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404242827224 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770257623141 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335402570956 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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