Some people feel that entertainers ( eg. Film stars , pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?Which other types of job should be highly paid
In all over the world film stars, musicians or sports personalities are treated in special manner, not only this, they are paid handsome amount for their work. I believe that stars of any field should get high remuneration and that should only include the film stars or sports start but also the professional from different field such as politics, scientist, education etc. I shall explain why I think like this.
There are various reasons for actors or actress or sports person etc.. to get high wages. Firstly, these people are very skilled in their own area and achieve high degree of professionalism by working so hard. Therefore, they should be rewarded in special way. It is also believed that most of these people set the new standards in their respective field. Ushan bolt, a world fastest athlete won the gold medals and set new records in 100 meters running. Secondly, in case of films stars or musicians, masses follow them and get entertained by their films, music or shows and fans spend money to buy the tickets of shows. If people have such popularity then they deserve the amount in that proportion. Thirdly, such people bring pride to their country by winning medals or get awards in international film festivals. For instance, Tom cruise won various awards in Oscar and made the America proud.
Another argument which linked to this high pay for starts is that are they the only one who should get such exorbitant payment. At various occasion, people from different fields achieved outstanding milestones and brought benefits to humankind. For example, researchers from medical field invented cures for fatal diseases such as cancer and made the people happy. Therefore, people such a scientist, technology innovators, doctors etc. also deserves the high pay.
To conclude, since star people from sports, film and music are public figure and entertain lots of peoples, they should get paid high but other people who achieved the excellence in other field are also entitled for handsome payment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04191616766 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50621515794 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562874251497 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.679396756 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6315789474 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215287692741 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612797094362 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595760981774 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156877747559 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625443343321 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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