Some people with good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad for their work. Why do you think that is?
What problems does this cause?
As per the recent media report, 25% of the people with masters degrees immigrate out of their homeland. It is believed that people with high level of education settle in a foreign country in search of a job. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the reason why people move out and I will also mention the concerning issues that arise from their immigration.
The main reason why highly educated people decide to move out of their native country is due to lack of job availability. This is to say that, some developing nations have a large number of population and less jobs. Hence, well educated and experienced individuals choose to shift to developed countries in search of more opportunities. India is a prime example of this situation, in India 9 out of 10 people are unemployed so most of the highly qualified people move to other countries.
The most concerning issue that this situation raises is that it creates a large gap between different nation's economies. The country with less educated workers end up with less efficient workers which drops the growth rate of their work industry. While the nations with more qualified people are able to make more advancements in their gross development rate. According to a research done by Harvard University, it was found that 80% of non-developed nations experienced a massive drop in their national growth rate when highly experienced people immigrated.
To conclude, many well experienced and educated people shift to a foreing country in order to find jobs. This causes their native country's growth rate to drop significantly. I am Indian and I moved to Canada after I finished my post-secondary education because I did not find jobs in India.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun jobs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s have a large number of population and less jobs. Hence, well educated and experien...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the growth rate of their work industry. While the nations with more qualified people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, second, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84771696394 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531468531469 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.973117207 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268171417702 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989742745052 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512134699711 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17321868445 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230695189518 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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