Some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in house compared with living in an apartment.
Nowadays, many families choose to live in town houses or condominiums compared to the landed properties. While owning a big house has been a traditional choice for many, the apartments are increasingly attracting busy individuals due to their convenient life style features.
The most compelling argument to own a house is that; houses are spacious and provide complete autonomy to the owner to build the living spaces as they wish. The owners are free to use their own imagination and preferences for designing layouts and interiors to match their tastes. Furthermore, the availability of space enables creation of gardens or landscapes that are aesthetically pleasing to the eye and bring people close to nature. Due to such distinctive attributes, living in a house is more comfortable compared to a space constrained apartment.
While there some clear benefits of living in house, there are also some drawbacks which are worth considering. Despite of their small size compared to houses, apartments offer plethora of shared facilities like playgrounds, swimming pools, car parks and gyms. Availing such shared facilities enable the apartment residents to live an active lifestyle at fraction of the cost. Additionally, those individuals living in a house need to dedicate their own personal time for the maintenance and up keep of the landed properties. While apartment living takes away such hassles by offering convenient maintenance services that gives more personal time for the residents.
In conclusion, despite of the flexibility & comfort, living in house is getting archaic. As it is increasingly common these days for people to lead a busy life, living in an apartment could be better choice for those who
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33823529412 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98723731761 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1232867589 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349664825691 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131247229286 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834646833663 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211877568936 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329116365271 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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