Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change, Others however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although change is inevitable, many try to find ways to avoid it and stick to their comfort zone. Some people spensd their whole lives doing the exact work over and over again whereas the others believe that one should constantly try new things.
There are two significant reasons for why people would avoid changes in their lives. The predominant justification for this to do with they do not believe they are qualified to take make these alterations. In other words, they lack confidence to take on a new challenge or to do things differently. An amateure cook, for instance, would not try to change a renowned recipie because the does not believe that he can make it better by modifying the ingredients. Another key factor is the scare that is related to the after effects of a certain change. People, therefore, are of the opinion that one should not fix something if it is not broken. The people who work in government driven organizations, for example, work there till retirement because of the perks associated with the job.
On the flip side, there are a few reasons why others of the opinion that they need to keep evolving and adapting to changes. The first such argument is related to their behavior, where they like to keep trying something new as they easily get bored of the job in hand. One such example of this is Gul Panag, who is not only a famous Indian actress but also a social media blogger, a food critic, and alsoand a certified pilot. The second reasoning is that they are unhappy with the situation. Moreover, they are confident that a small improvement can lead to a positive difference in the way things are happening currently. These kind of mindsThese kinds of minds are always looking to make changes in the smallest way possible not only physically by replacing the furniture around the house but also mentally by getting out of toxic relationships. They truly have imbibled the idea that if you want something you need to be ready for change
In conclusion, either you are happy in your comnfort zone or feel restless and want to break the monotonous lifestyle and keep trying something new. In my opinion, it is important to try new things in life even if you are afraid of the outcsome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun try seems to be countable; consider using: 'many tries'.
Suggestion: many tries
Although change is inevitable, many try to find ways to avoid it and stick to t...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...trying something new as they easily get bored of the job in hand. One such example of th...
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Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...the way things are happening currently. These kind of mindsThese kinds of minds are always...
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Line 5, column 942, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omething you need to be ready for change In conclusion, either you are happy in y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58252506375 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2936786635 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.235294118 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195225725241 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617122639027 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503487761297 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12283257356 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463595407647 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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