Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternative ways to decrease crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Laws in many countries are defined by their constitution or the government. Violating them generally attracts imprisonment.
It is often suggested by some people that the higher the prison sentence, the lower will be the crime rate. However, there
are contrary views to this suggesting numerous alternatives to reduce crime. In this essay, I will elaborate on both the views
and suggest why other methods are fruitful in the long term.
There are many ways to create a sense of fear in potential criminals, and one of those is to have them serve longer
sentences. Though it keeps them away from society for a longer time and reduces the probability of criminal activities
happening in the region, it has shown negligible improvement in crime rates across the world.
On drilling deeper into the criminal's mindset to understand the root cause of the crime, the primary reasons that emerge
are poverty and inadequate reinforcement. In countries where there are better opportunities available for the
underprivileged, the crime rate is generally noted to be lower. Better lifestyle, employment opportunities, and economic
stimulus packages by the government have sustained a lower rate for the long term. Another reason to achieve this is to
ensure adequate enforcement. Lack of coverage enables the potential criminal to conduct a crime and vindicate
themselves, which often makes them repeat offenders. Countries such as Phillippines and Indonesia have enforced
nationwide policing to keep a check on drug related activities through world-class training, an adequate number of police
personnel, and sufficient supplies of material. Applying such measures to fight crime leads to an intrinsic development of
the society.
In conclusion, the believers of longer prison sentences still continue to take their stand, however, in my opinion, it is not a
long term solution to fight crime and create awareness in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'criminals'' or 'criminal's'?
Suggestion: criminals'; criminal's
...the world. On drilling deeper into the criminals mindset to understand the root cause of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43234323432 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98950153947 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1075554319 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.733333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206634946085 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612147952294 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582887988144 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573442786936 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544713699942 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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