Some people prefer to work for a large company.
Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
There are number of companies that are running their business around the world. Proportion of them are big companies, while others are small-scale corporation. depend on the choice, some individuals like to do job for the large companies, while other prefer to work for little organisation. Although both of them doing great job to support our economy, but I would like to join large-scale business.
To begin with, firms that are doing business on large-scale has a lot of advancement opportunities. And working with them help you to meet that job advancements and incentives. There are better chances to get promotion as compare to chances in small-scale industries. For example:- a person can go form a regular associated to manager in big multinational companies as compare to working with local business where you don't have enough growth opportunity. In addition to that, their is significant gap between the wages of worker of both industries. The large companies employee got more salary compare to other corporation employee. As the profit margin of these companies are a lot that's why they like to give little extra incentives to their employee.
On the other side, there are few advantage of working with micro enterprises. one of them is the less workload and pressure. small-scale association are dealing mainly on local level either in city or just in province. so, as result clients of the companies are limited, which lead to less workload and pressure. Whereas, in big businesses where the clients are in huge number, so as the competition. And to secure job employees have to give there best. Excessive amount of workload leads to pressure and stress on an individual.
In conclusion, Its depend on individuals choice where they choose to work. Despite of all the stress and pressure I would go with big co-operations, where there is some opportunities and incentives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12580645161 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97478302184 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51935483871 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.634903408 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.45 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261188300346 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657285077919 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702803251905 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14786871118 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737629607249 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.