Many people argue that advertisements attracts customers in buying different products which are not really needed, whereas others argue that these adverts act as a source of information for the people, about the new product launched in the market. I agree with the latter statement, as the technology advance, newly developed or upgraded products will be introduced in the market and to reach the consumer, advertising is the best option.
People are often influenced by advertisement and they end up buying things that are unnecessary. The way ads are designed nowadays, it clouds the mind of an individual and mislead them to buy them. For instance, ads of vacation package posted by clubs like Country Club, they attract people in the name of a free stay at their selected destination by charging them some maintenance fees. Such marketing strategy influence people's decision, and encourage them to buy such package without giving a second thought.
On the other hand, sometimes ads related to certain products are of a great help. Advertisement can give people the required information regarding any new product available in the market. A company can reach great number of customers through proper advertising, and hence can increase their overall sale. For example, Television, everyone has a Tv at their home, but with the advancement of technology new designed and improved viewing quality of television has been updated and launched in the market, so with proper advertisement only, people will come to know about the features of the product. Similarly, household products are often updated with the better version and such products draws attention through advertisements by their selling company. So it can be said that adverts are boon for the newly launched products.
In conclusion, I agree that advertisements helps a lot to keep an update about the products that are available in the market. Companies are going to market their products with attractive offers and ads to draw the attention of customers, however, its an individual's choice to buy it or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...aw the attention of customers, however, its an individuals choice to buy it or not....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, really, regarding, second, similarly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20895522388 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86197834142 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540298507463 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8470793529 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.642857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213949541707 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817408567573 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594847122882 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13843309513 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387165874957 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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