Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
In today's world, advertising has changed the way good and services are sold in global markets. Any kind of product or offering has the capability to become an overnight sensation, if it is marketed well. In this essay, we will discuss about the pivotal role that advertising plays in improving people's lives by infoming them about the pros and cons of various products and services.
Some people believe that advertisements create needs in the minds of consumers and provokes them to purchase a product. It is true that a need is created, however, advertisements only highlight the benefits of a particular product and no kind of coercion is involved. For example, water purifiers are installed in majority households; however, some people still prefer to drink tap water or use other methods to filter water. Evidently, advertisements about water purifiers only help in informing customers about their advantages; the decision to buy or not to buy lies with the consumer.
People often blame advertisements for increasing household expenses and promting unnecessary purchasing amonst buyers. It is important to understand the post purchase benefits and weigh them against the cost of procuring these products. For example, the sales of a solar portable charger increased by 40% in 2019 when the online advertisement depicting its advantages went viral. Although these chargers were more expensive than their electrical counterparts, they were easily rechargeable on the go and did not need electric supply.
In a nutshell, this essay discussed the importance of advertisements in improving lives of people by informing them about new products and services. Advertising helps drive the competition upwards benefitting the end customers as they get various options to choose from.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, well, for example, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41218637993 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01785303731 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.5613262503 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241393697883 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857183243017 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662507299076 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148677983784 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530518295915 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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