Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to inquire about the possibility of accepting my 14 years old son 'Max' in class 8 in your esteemed school as we are planning to move to Caen city next month. I researched many other schools but your institute has a good reputation and better facilities and I would be grateful if you can assist with the enrollment process.
Max has always been a diligent student and his academic records are excellent so far. His current teachers and friends admire him very much. Besides, he is also a champion football player and represents his academy at the state and national levels. Furthermore, he has received many awards in extracurricular activities like debates, drawing, and outdoor sports.
It would be very kind of you to accept him in your institute and allow him to begin attending class when the next term starts.
Looking forward to your positive response. Please do let me know if you need any additional information from my end.
Yours faithfully,
John Wick
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91812865497 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73462934864 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.736842105263 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5282747529 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23333421672 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737604555168 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04343088317 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12074200158 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511310077629 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.