Advertisements have become increasingly popular around the world these days. While some individuals claim that thanks to those ads, they purchase particular commodities, others state that due to its widespread nature advertising is not attracting buyers anymore. This essay will discuss why adverts’ prevalence is no longer playing a preponderant role, and why some people still get persuaded to buy things by watching them.
It is said that because of the ubiquity of advertisements, people are losing interest in them. This might be because the repeated demonstration of the same ads over and over again makes the public exhausted and irritated. As a result, nobody wants to follow adverts since they purvey the same information ceaselessly. For example, according to a recent survey, more than half of the world population ignore advertisements while making purchases. Thus, advertising is so ubiquitous that residents no longer pay attention to it.
On the other hand, despite being prevalent, advertisement still possesses the power to affect the purchaser’s decisions to buy goods. In other words, there are some people who encounter challenges in choosing a particular item, and this leads them to meticulously observe the advertisement for that product in order to make the final decision. Besides, current advertising companies employ famous figures so as to make it appealing and attract more customers. For instance, the shampoo brand called “Head and Shoulders” has recently succeeded to accumulate the largest number of customers simply because the well-known actor advertised the product. Therefore, the success of advertising in persuading people to buy things is inevitable.
In conclusion, advertising is considered to be undeniably widespread. Although, this widespread usage is too common in a way that it is losing attention of some people, I believe that certain section of societies still makes purchasing decisions based on the advertisements they see.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...rtising companies employ famous figures so as to make it appealing and attract more cust...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56435643564 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14412518927 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2029966796 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306035277445 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10600339693 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880673926238 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179511732971 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547256639721 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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