Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough time on learning practical skills.
Do you agree or disagree?
Current structure of education system is questionable among certain demographics of the society as education system mainly focuses on factual knowledge than practical aspects. Even I strongly agree with this viewpoint and this essay will discuss my opinion on this with suitable examples.
It is true that from primary to masters level, students study theory of a specific subject, which leads to sketchy information of that area. For example, In Mathematics, complex theorems and formulas are applied to solve any problem but at the same time, there is an absence of awareness about practical usage in the field of Science and Research, Algorithm Design and Information Technology. Therefore, pupils failed to apply and correlate their field of study with the practical aspects of their jobs.
In addition to this, curriculum of educational courses at all levels should be updated and equal weightage should be set for theory and practical part. Moreover, pressure to secure high grades in exams also inhibit the children to go beyond the syllabus and explore the applications areas of the subject of their interest. To support this fact, one study by student group of London, shows that due to scoring high in academics, 90% of the students have limited bookish knowledge about their field than practical usage. Hence, there is definite need of amendment in educational curriculum.
In conclusion, by considering aforementioned facts, educational system should be reformed so that students can excel in their respective careers by gaining empirical skills at an early level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36947791165 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79579229796 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63453815261 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2223526459 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.7 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868647607391 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03210975478 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251279990927 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479137725729 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027140970886 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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