Some people say that artists such as painters, writers, and musicians affect our lives more than scientists. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.
Certain people believe that creative people like painters, writers and musicians create an impression on our lives whereas other people thinks that in reality, scientists are more effective in the lives of people. Although creative artists brings better changes in the lives of people, I believe that scientists are making aware of consequences of modern way of life.
Millions of people are leading a life of misery and in certain ways everyone connect themselves to musicians when they hear the music of different emotions like sadness or happiness. It relives them of their burden of life. Similarly, painters like M.F Hussain in one picture had shown the adverse effects of modern life where we are surrounded by the mobiles, internet and ample of rubbish around. This painting was admired by large number of people and had a drastic impact on people in age from 30 to 40 as per survey from Indian government. Not to mention there is idiom which says that “Pen is mightier than the sword:, which stresses that writer is a person who can bring a significant change in the society by writing on achievements of leaders like Mr. Obama, Mahatma Gandhi and other great leaders.
Despite the above, It is a common phenomenon that research is acting as boon to people’s life, which is conducted by this intelligent scientists. Understanding the adverse effects of mobile and watching television for longer number of hours as well as understanding about detrimental effects of gases being emitted by vehicles is attributed to the fact that scientists had done strenuous hours of research to conclude on these activities. Only after realization of these facts, government had started to work about banning the vehicles which does not meet the environmental standards as people had gained awareness about not being addictive to these gadgets like television or mobiles. That why we can say that science not only protects us but provide us the right direction to live in our lives with the technology as well as with these modes of transport like cars etc.
To sump up, In spite of the better changes in life of the people due to the creative artists, I think science contributes in our understanding about the positive as well as negative aspects of the modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, well, whereas, i think, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72107808193 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542105263158 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6197471091 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.333333333 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123452968577 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461362833555 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444782325922 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786671806835 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411213726493 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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